MUSINGS ON WRITING
 

Here are titles and brief summaries of my various LJ entries on aspects of writing or fanfic.  These are not all entries, by any means, only those I think might continue to be of interest to some.  Most recent at the top.  If you're looking for the History Meta, find it HERE.


Aiding the Willing Suspension of Disbelief (or Why Research Matters) 5/3
Research is important for literary reasons, not just so the author can avoid looking foolish (or to please the nitpickers).  Speculative fiction authors have understood for a while that the more fantastic the setting or unbelievable the elements in a story, or the more realistic the rest needs to be in order to make the impossible seem possible.

The romance iconoclast gets brutally honest (or Things That Make Me Laugh) (2/18)

A little list of things that throw me out of a story -- especially a romantic story -- even with characters I love ... all served with a side dish of snark because the flu made me cranky.  But it's a good guide to Common Beginners Errors to avoid like the, er, flu.

Poll Results: Is it Self-Promotion or Arrogance (1/25)
results of the poll I conducted about how authors present their work on comms, archives, their own LJ, etc., and how others perceive their choices ... when does simple self-promotion spill over into arrogance in the eyes of others?

Writing [Talented] Original Characters in Fanfic (without creating a Mary Sue/Gary Stu) (1/15)
A discussion about creating not just good original characters, but good original characters that have unique talents -- because real people sometimes do -- without turning them into an unrealistic Mary Sue.  It is possible to create believable characters who are special.  Writers do it all the time.

Random Thoughts on Meyer's Twilight (1/6)
Not particularly well-organized, but a collections of thoughts as they came to me about the series as a whole, not just the Indians, including my 'issues' with the character of Bella and why I find the Bella/Edward relationship ultimately unconvincing, and perhaps even harmful to teenaged girls' ideas about 'true love.'

The Glory of Plot (1/5/2008)
A plot is a journey on which the writer takes the reader ...  an explanation of what plot is, why it's not scary, and why it IS necessary in fiction, with some handy "how-to"s for those interested in trying their hands at writing especially longer stories in fandom.  Just as applicable to writing original fiction, however.

Indians and (Stephenie Meyer's) Twilight (12/26)
For those familiar with the vampire YA novels by Stephenie Meyer, which feature some native characters prominently, this is my own reactions, as a native person, reading the series.  Some things I liked, some I didn't, but most of my complaints were errors of omission rather than comission.

Six (often unconsidered) Things That Kick Me Out of a Story (8/26)
A somewhat random collection of things that aren't fandom specific that will cause me to quit reading a story, ranging from bad formatting to stilted dialogue and run-on sentences.  A "beware" post for fandom authors.

The Author is God, or Avoiding the Runaway Story (8/15)
What happens when a plotline suddently mutates on a writer?  When is that a good thing -- when is it a problem?  How do we, as writers, avoid the "runaway' story?  Living stories are wonderful, until they become little dictators.  In the end, the author must remain in control of her project.  This is some advice on how to do that.

Bringing the Native Funny (8/11)
Done for International Blog Against Racism Week ... a slightly different take on the theme, where I give some various examples of specifically native humor.  Some of it could be offensive to those with high sensitivity to such things.  Indians are more inclined to tell it like they see it than worry about offending people. ;>

Cedric versus ... Cedric? (7/26)
A short discussion about writing different 'versions' of the same character, whether it's Scott or Cedric ... of interest for the comments from other writers on why they enjoy writing multiple versions too.

Agitatin' ... or Why Cho Chang's Behavior in Book 5 is NOT Overly Weepy (5/22)
Speaking from my experience as a former bereavement counselor, some observations on Cho Chang's behavior in Book 5, The Order of the Phoenix, and why it is NOT either unusual or excessively "emo."

Dialogue Framing (4/26)
Some advice not on dialogue itself, but on the framing of dialogue within narrative.

... yet another entry in the fanfic-profic debate (4/10)
the lure of the RISK of fanfic for the professional author.  Can I do it again?  Can I sell you my fic again, without my name, without any context?  It's both the challenge and danger of fanfic for the pro author.

Symbol, Cypher and Foil: will the real Cedric Diggory please stand up? (3/7/2007)
A thorough discussion of just what we can know about Cedric from the canon -- which is more than you might think, but still not a lot.  Discusses only canon Cedric, the base I've used to build my character from.  Also includes, at the bottom, a collection of links to Cedric-centric communities on LJ.

Rockin' the Casbah: or, so I complained about Beginning-Writer Errors, What about Experienced Authors? (10/11)
All writers commit errors, it's just that as time goes on, they tend to be different kinds of errors.  So this involves errors I've seen writers make, who've been writing a long time.

Develop, Develop, Develop: or random observation the eleventy-second on Beginning Writers' errors (10/6)
Pacing problems among beginning writers -- overtell and undertell -- cause the story to move too slowly, or too fast. Discusses the importance of letting things develop.

Why Hufflepuff is not Consonant with "The Pushover House" (9/20)
Watch Min get her rant on about how Hufflepuff is commonly misunderstood and why the best adjective to describe Hufflepuff is not loyal or patient or honest ... but STRONG.

So You Want to Write to an Author? (9/2)
Some common-sense suggestions for those who want to write, but aren't sure what to say to an author (fanfic or profic) and fear Committing Squee.  (Authors rarely mind squee, but some readers worry about sending it.)

The Question of Fan Ownership: Logical vs. Specific (8/13)
A semi-response/dialogue with Mo's entry about Beyond Plagiarism: discusses inspiration and legitimate borrowing in fandom.  What's just a logical extension of canon in fanfic 'fanon,' as opposed to what can be traced to a specific fan author?

Crafting the Hook: a pragmatic writer's guide to snaring reader interest (8/10)
The beginnings of stories are the most important part because they determine whether a reader will read the rest.  This entry offers points on how to craft a good beginning ... and some common errors to avoid.

Quick-and-Dirty Tutorial on (North) American Indian Magic, for HP writers and interested others (7/17)
Designed to help authors of HP fanfic in particular if they wish to write about American Indian magic -- with an emphasis on how Indian religion and magic differs from traditional Western views -- but usable by anyone.

The Lure of Cedric and Hermione (6/18)
Or how the famously canon-fixated goes for something completely off the wall.  Why on earth did I get snared by a pairing between two characters who never even talking in the book (or film), much less had anything resembling UST?  essentially my manifesto on why I think this pairing works.

X3 and the Art of Adaptation (6/10)
My review [finally] of X3 ... what went wrong and why it, ultimately, flopped as a whole, even if parts of it were fun to watch.

A Love Letter (to my betas, editors and image people) (5/22)
Just what it says.  Done for the Fandom Appreciation Challenge, I thought it high time to recognize some of the people who make my stories better.

Unreasonable Dislikes and Bulletproof Kinks (5/11)
Some things in fiction that either really turn me off or really turn me on (and I don't mean in an erotic way).

"My Cedric" Character Meme (4/19)
Following the pattern of the "My ___" meme, a summary of how I see/understand Cedric Diggory (especially as in Finding Himself, but not exclusively).

The Fine Art of Pacing (4/6)
This is something of a repeat of some things I wrote in an entry below, but again, addresses the sometimes difficult matter of pacing a story (especially a longer story) so as not to lose reader interest.

Well, Fuck (or, She Seems to Have a New Fandom) (4/1)
My 'coming out,' if you will (g), into the Harry Potter fandom.  An explanation as to why Cedric Diggory ran off with my brain ... and I haven't seen it since.

The Iconoclastic 'Shipper (3/30)
"When I say ''ships,' I mean relationships of all kinds.  Friendship, romance, familial ... it's all fair game for me.  I could care less (well, within reason) about WHO Character A is involved with rather than with WHY."

Thinky Thoughts on ... (gasp) Harry Potter Pairings (3/8)
This attempted to explain why I find the idea of Ron/Hermione dubious in the long-run ... without either disliking Ron or wailing about Rowling's 'betrayal.'  I should add that I have no trouble with R/Hr short-term.  I just wonder if they wouldn't be heading for the Big D by 30-something?

Fandom: What Draws Us In? (2/24)
Written for the Cereta's "Notscapade" meme on fandom discussion for those unable to make Escapade, this entry explores what draws me (and people generally) into a fandom.  Branches off from a look at why I wasn't pulled by SGA, but was by X-Files and X-Men.

The Novel, the Novella and the Short Story in Fanfic (2/9)
There was some discussion of a support group for novel writers to encourage more fanfic novels.  As a novelist, I tried to discuss why short stories are the most common fiction form in fanfic, and how a novel, or even a novella, is essentially a different animal, not just a 'longer short story.'

Play, Perfection and Process After Release (1/22)
Another post on why write fanfic from a slightly different perspective.  Discusses the importance of doing things for fun, not profit (even if one could do them for profit), as well as the unique dialogue between the creator and audience.

Writing Sinew (1/5.2006)
Writing "and then time passes" sections of fiction can be harder than it seems.  An entry with a series of tips of things I've found that work for me, to make these sections smooth.

Hmm [X3 Trailer], X3 Rumors and Speculation: Storm & Cyclops, More X3 Meta (12/5-7)
A series of posts inspired by the release of the X3 trailer that discusses the lack of Cyclops, all the rumors about Marsden's (and Berry's) part in the screentime of Cyclops and Storm, and some general speculation on X3.

LJ Fandom, the Artificial Beast (11/13)
Fandom has, in recent years, moved -- at least partly -- onto Live Journal.  What used to be email list communities have become LJ list communities.  But the Balkanization of LJ and the rise of multifandomness there can lead (I think) to some false impressions about both fans and fan status.

Choosing a Point of View: Advantages and Disadvantages of Each (9/18)
A discussion of first, third and omniscient points of view in narrative, why, when and how they should be employed.

'Ask them a question' Character Meme (8/13)
A meme that invited readers to ask questions of various characters in my novels, and I answered for them 'in character.'  This seemed to garner quite a number of questions from readers.

Disabilities, Mutations and the X-Men (8/2)
A fandom-specific discussion in response to a metafandom discussion about dis/abilities in fandom, and why we don't see more of them.  I find it interesting, that in X-Men, the creator of the X-Men and the field leader are both 'handicapped' in some capacity.

The (not necessarily pretty) Confessions of an Artist (7/29)
'We live our lives through our work.'  A discussion of the tendency among artists of all kinds to obsess, and to migrate from interest to interest, following the needs of whatever project/piece is currently in the offing.

When is Fanfiction not Fanfiction? (7/28)
Thoughts on definitions of fanfic, and maintaining characterization.

Miscellaneous, Idle Thoughs of Fanfic and Ownership (6/27)
Written partly in response to the Robin Hobb/Lee Goldberg anti-fanfic rants, some thoughts about the ethics of fanfic, and how the (very) various nature of our source material may be more important that sometimes credited in these debates.

Death, Genres and Sacred Cows (6/3)
Some commentary on various X3 spoilers, and why they make me nervous (beyond the fate of favorite characters and other sacred cows, etc.)

Fanfic and Frustration (5/13)
There are films and TV shows that I like, even like a lot, but don't read fanfic for.  This was a relatively short (for me) exploration of just what it is that pulls me into a fandom.

Critique, critique, critique (4/7)
Constructive criticism versus negative feedback -- what's the difference?  How do we know to whom we can give it?

Stereotypes and 'Ethnic Ownership' in Fiction (3/2)
Who has the 'right' to write ethnic characters?  Periodically, the issue of 'not enough ethnic characters in fanfic' is sounded.  This discussion was a take off on that, about the problem that "ethnic ownership" can impose on those who want to write ethnic characters, but who don't belong to the ethnicity in question.

Writing Relationships, Censorship and Authorial Responsibility (2/2/2005)
In response to a request to write about " fanfic giving younger readers a rather skewed idea of what real relationships entail."   The eternal problem of weighing responsibility versus creative freedom.


X-Men's First Couple (10/5)
Written for the LJ community Ship Manifesto, this is a dissection of the Scott/Jean pairing ... why it works, and why it might not.  A thumbnail overview.

Handling Trauma in Fiction (9/15)
Using Special as an example, I made some attempt to talk about how authors might approach trauma in fiction (whether fanfic or not).  It's dangerous, if powerful, subject matter, and deserves respectful handling.

Write What you Know (8/12a) and Daughter of Write What You Know (writing realistic sex for women) (8/12b)
Two different essays, the furst that take on that old saw 'write what you know' and explores what that REALLY means, and the second that puts that a bit into practice with a look at how to write the loss of virginity realistically.  Be aware that the second essay is quite graphic.

Power of Narrative versus Power of Subject (or the Approach of the Approach of Splendor) (7/24)
It's not the what, it's the HOW that makes writing strong.  Why milking trauma doesn't necessarily make a good writer, and 'deviant' behavior and shocking topics won't necessarily yield a powerful story.

Jean ... or Scott? (4/29)
A response to an interview question: 
Your acknowledged favorite character is Jean, but the narrative voice in your work is more often than not that of Scott's. Any particular reason for this?

The Big Easy (no date)
A trip report designed for fanfic authors (especially of Gambit) who write about New Orleans.

Graciousness in the White Tower (3/4)
Overflowing irritation at a panel respondent at an academic conference.  My thoughts on surviving (and being respected) in academia.

Please Pass Some Crisis with the Peas (Writing Short Isn't Necessarily Easy) (2/20)
Discussion of story length (short versus long), flash fiction, vignettes, and why writing (very) short stories is harder than one thinks

Character Depth (1/4/2004)
Prompted by a question, a discussion of the use of backstory in creating character depth -- even if a lot of that backstory never makes it onto the actual page.

Vocations, Occupations and Hobbies (11/25/2003)
"Why I Write Fanfic," from a professional author, in response to the popular assumption that Real Writers Don't Write Fanfic.

Doing Research (11/16)
How do writers go about doing research for their stories?  What are their main tools and where does one go to find this information?  (Additionally, the comments include further pointers/suggestions from a couple librarians.)

Analysis of a Poll on Readers and Fanfic (11/12)
How and what do readers personally choose what constitutes 'good' writing in fanfic?  What's important to readers?


Why Writing Good Girls and Boys is Subversive (10/3)
"Well-behaved Women Seldom Make History," or so said Laurel Thatcher Ulrich, but what, precisely, did she mean?  And why is it that 'well-behaved' characters are perceived to be boring in so much fanfic (and fiction)?  And why is my form of 'misbehavior' to write them anyway?

Appearances & Reality -- the Scott of Special (9/29)
I've been asked a couple of times how and where I came up with the twist I put on Scott's origins in Special: the Genesis of Cyclops, so I made some attempt to explain.

Getting Published (8/30)
I was asked for some pointers on getting published.

Ethnicity, and Specificity in Writing (8/20)
In response to an interview question about how my ethnicity affects my writing, I did a little essay on issues of ethnicity and specificity in fiction writing.

When is a Story Successful? (8/15)
How does one measure the 'success' of a story, whether profic or fanfic?  Can success ever really be measured?


The Art of Pacing (6/26)
How to manage pacing and avoid pitfalls so that stories neither drag, nor move too quickly.

Editing (or Beta-Reading) (6/19)
Some (brief) helpful hints on editing.

Story Reflections: "Micky Blue Eyes" Duo (5/21)
Briefish reflection on the series.

Min's Review of X2 (5/3) and Scott's Reaction in X2 (5/11)
The first is a detailed review and critique of the film, and the second is a discussion of Scott's reaction at the very end from the point of view of a former bereavement counselor.  Spoilers, ahoy!

Feedback, Feedback (4/23) and More on Feedback (including Victoria's survey) (4/23)
Just what it says, a discussion about feedback, decreasing feedback and the theory of diminishing returns, with reference to a discussion begun by Peggy.

Story Reflections: "Idle Musings" & "After the 49s" (3/31)
Brief reflections on two of my favorite short pieces on the site.

Fanfic Marketing (3/28)
Some tips on how to increase story distribution and readership.

Drafts, Revisions & Editors (3/26)
Discussion of the editing process.

The Audience (3/15)
Tips on keeping the reader reading, aimed a bit more at the professional market, but applicable to fanfic as well.

Social Stratification and the "BNF" Phenomenon (2/16)
Pretty much what it sounds like -- a quasi-academic sociological inquiry into the phenomenon of the so-called "Big Name Fan."

Better Description in Fiction Writing (2/1/2003)
Guide to writing better descriptive passages, both in fanfic and profic, and how fanfic description differs from profic.

What Makes Good Fic Good? (10/22/2002)
The criteria that myself use to evaluate fanfic (or any fiction) in terms of quality for awards

Dilettantes and Connoisseurs: Critique and the Marketing of Fanfic (8/28)
Just how hot should we get under the collar about fanfic quality ... and why (or why not)?

Following the Big Fin: Outlines, Storyarcs and Plotting (8/16)
Comments on the usefulness of outlines in story writing.

Good Writing, Bad Writing and the Slash / Het / Gen Question (8/9)
Is one "type" of fanfic inclined to be better than another?  I don't think it's ever that simple.

The Three Tiers of Editing (8/25)
Comments on the levels of editing in a story.

Style and Heart in Narrative (7/6)
What I call "style" and why I consider it secondary to having "heart"

Storytellers versus Cathartic Writers (6/28)
Why do we write?  Not just write fanfic, but why do we write?

Reclaiming Philia (6/20, updated 6/29/05)
Western society's penchant for sexualizing intense relationships that aren't familial, and how that affects writers

Responsibility and Compassion in Fiction Writing (6/9)
The responsible handling of traumatic events in fiction, with side dips into PCism and gentilezza

Writer's Block (6/4)
Some tricks that work for me, overcoming writer's block

The Lure of Angst (5/3)
'Mundane grace,' or why powerful scenes don't always require something dire

Issues in Style: Sentence Length (4/14)
How something as 'insignificant' as sentence length can affect the shape and pacing of a story

Vaguaries of Feedback (4/4/2002)
Thoughts on feedback:  what I find useful, why people send (or don't send) it, and the fact that it's a two-way street